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I have to say i liked it and i will show it to my friends. only problem is the sound. the effects are cheap and repetitive and it could use some music, but the music might ruin it. so maybe get some more varying sound effects. record your own heavy breathing for a few breaths and loop that instead of a stock sound of one breath. if it's going to go in a portfolio, it's got to be your best, so i'm just trying to lend you some constructive criticism. On the whole, I thought it was great fun and the facial expressions were hilarious. your comedic timing is great too.